Hi there, my name is Gloria and I am a student in LH3 at Gisborne Intermediate. I really like the way it was clear and easy to read. In the video it talked about you , your interests and background. It reminded me of my blog post “about me”.I personally don't think you need to improve this piece as it is clear readable and pretty. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://gisintgloriaa.Blogspot.co.nz.
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ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Gloria and I am a student in LH3 at Gisborne Intermediate. I really like the way it was clear and easy to read. In the video it talked about you , your interests and background. It reminded me of my blog post “about me”.I personally don't think you need to improve this piece as it is clear readable and pretty. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://gisintgloriaa.Blogspot.co.nz.
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