IT was a normal radiant day in Marshport, Talia was sleeping serenely waiting to do her normal school routine. When she woke up she went to her very shiny mirror. She looked in the mirror, and her mouth opened wide and her eyes could not believe the reflection that stared back at her.
Looking back it was her face, her same clothes but she could see clearly two clear, white wings, like those of an angel.
It had a very smooth touch. She did a terrifying scream that everybody could hear and slightly fainted to the ground.
She woke up a few minutes later and came sprinting from her room and practiced trying to fly for the first time.
You won’t believe what she could see through her own eyes. She thought she was in her own imagination she opened her eyes again and she was flying. She landed on the ground safely. She opened the door and she couldn’t see anyone in her family until she noticed a little note on the fridge saying, Dear Talia we have gone to work and will see you Tonight.
When talia went to school everyone was shocked that talia had wings. When she made it back home she could hear something strange from the living room she opened the door silently. When she opened the door she could see a person with a cloak and covered their identity, The person told Talia to sit down and take this before sunset. If she didn’t take potion before sunset she would have wings through her whole life.
As soon as she was given the potion the person disappeared and wondered where the person went. She flew upstairs and went into the bathroom and took the potion and made her go to sleep. Talia woke up and runned to the bathroom to see if her wings were gone She
turned around and all of a sudden her wings were gone. Talia was relieved that her wings were gone and things went back to normal.
Hi Illian ,
ReplyDeleteYour writing was very interesting ,
I think you should work on using your paragraphs more carefully ,
Good job